Mara Pryce never imagined that her life was anything but normal and then a strange gray-eyed young man appears at her graduation. When he vanishes without a trace, she’s convinced he’s a figment of her imagination. Then he appears again and shatters her whole world.
Mara is an enchanter, part of an ancient line of Wiccan power, and a war is raging—one of good and evil—between the Enchanted and the Iniquitous.
The Iniquitous want her dead and it’s Theodore’s job as her protector to keep her safe.
When Mara and Theodore arrive at a safe house, where Mara will remain hidden while learning about her powers, they find that the real threat might be a little closer to home than they want to believe.
2 stars — I received a free copy in exchange for an honest and unbiased review/opinion.
I hate when this happens. I actually won an ARC of this book, but it just did not work out for me. And that always bums me out. I’ve never read anything by this author before, but I’ve heard great things about her contemporary books…so I’m uncertain if it’s just that her voice doesn’t shine through as well in non-contemp books? I’ll maybe give those a try before I decide if we’re just not a match.
So what didn’t work for me? Well, for one thing, I didn’t like ANY of the characters. ANY of them. I didn’t really hate any of them, but I couldn’t care less about them and what was happening to them. They felt very shallow, both in attitude and in how they were represented…I needed more dimensions. I honestly couldn’t really tell you very much about them. And what I can tell you, I didn’t really like.
Mara was very flat. She barely reacted to anything that happened to her, and her emotional reactions to the bad things were short-lived (except the dream/vision…that one was better, I actually felt for her). She didn’t seem to form connections with anyone, or when she did it was immediate and we weren’t shown what drew them to one another.
And Theo…well he was a dick. And I get he was supposed to be a dick, but the moments that were supposed to swing me to his favour just didn’t work for me. They did not supersede his bad attitude. And holy volatile!! I can’t tell you the number of times he just started screaming at people (usually his sister) out of nowhere! They were over the top reactions in my opinion.
As for secondary characters, nothing from them either. We barely met her BFF Dani before she was out of the picture, or her father (though he might have been cool). Adelaide was OK, but mostly she came across very self-absorbed and whiny…she felt younger than her age. And she and Mara together were mean girls, the way they thought/talked about Naomi…I was NOT impressed. Winston was whiny and oblivious, I didn’t even feel for him like I should. And I couldn’t figure out Finn or Ethan, we got no time with either of them. Though I guess I did like Nigel, the cat.
As for the paranormal aspect, well quite frankly I didn’t really learn enough about it to form an opinion. Most of the book was about the push and pull between Mara and Theo. Honestly, I was pretty bored. It wasn’t until 95% into the book before something really action-y happened. Uh, that’s WAY too late to get my interest.
*sigh* I could probably elaborate, but that will bring me into meaner territory, and I try to avoid that. Honestly, this book had quite a lot of potential. It has a lot of the same basic setups of many of these paranormal books (girl doesn’t know anything about the paranormal world, but is apparently a chosen one, falls for a bad boy), but I don’t mind that. In fact I’m often attracted to that. I feel like the author just needed someone to tell her when she was being repetitive, both in phrases (how many times did I need to read “why does something so wrong feel so right?”) and in plot points…when she had inconsistencies…when she needed to tell the reader how Mara felt about learning her whole life had been a lie, when she needed to give the reader MORE. *sigh*
Basically, good bones, poor execution. Needless to say, despite that killer ending, I won’t be reading further. But I will try out this author’s contemporaries, perhaps I’m just pickier when it comes to my non-contemps.